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Friday, June 19, 2009

Afterschool by Loretta & Dacnarie

Afterschool

3:05 school ends,
3:05 student council begins
We play a quick game
or two
and then we talk about
what's coming soon!

Learning about teamwork
and
how to care.

We write a story
about 4 girls
they go on an adventure
to save the world.

We write about school
and
problems in the
world.

Thats something we do afterschool.

UNMS BAM! by Dacnarie Molina

UNMS BAM!

UNMS BAM!
What a name,
well atleast it ain't lame
this newsletter ain't no game

UNMS BAM!
What a place
No need to pace!
Go to that place

UNMS BAM!
Best site
even in the night
Oh what a sight.

Thursday, June 18, 2009

Was it worth it?


Dacnarie: Hey! It's Dacnarie and Loretta and we are going to talk about one of our past essential questions. The question is "Why do people come to America?" I think people came to America because they wanted a "better life" and they thought that they could get that in America. What do you think Loretta?

Loretta: I agree with you, Dacnarie. People came to America because of the pull factors that America had. For example, many may have came to America because of all the rumors of America being the the "Golden Land". Another pull factor was, like Dacnarie said, they thought they would've gotten a better life as in better education, work, and more. In addition to the pull factors, there were push factors. Immigrants might have wanted to escape from their countries because of persecution, proverty, or maybe it was harder to earn money. While we were studying this question we also studied the question "Was it worth it for them and for us?" in this unit. What do you think Dacnarie?

Dacnarie: Well, Loretta I think it was worth it for us but not worth it for them. It was worth it for us because we (America) learned a lot from our past. Like, to not put kids in sweatshops and to not torture immigrants. It wasn't worth it for them because they had to deal with being judged and tortured. They also had to live in small tenements and work for more then 10 hours but they earned almost no money. But at the same time their hometowns must have been way worse so I guess it was worth it for some people. What do you think Loretta?

Loretta: I think that also Dacnarie. My reason is like yours but a bit different. It was good for America because it created diversity in the country and it helped America grow. But I think that while it might have been better in some ways in America than the immigrants hometown, like you said, it still must've been hard to assimalite in America. In addition to that they had to face segregation. Any additional comments Dacnarie?

Dacnarie: Yeah, I want to say a couple of thing about segregation. Segregation wasn't a very good thing at the time. They would seperate people by color and race. This brings me back to what you and I were saying about making America a better place. It showed America that segregation of race isn't good at all. Wouldn't you agree?

Loretta: Yes I do. This helped me grow as a person because I learned in this unit how people came to America putting all their hope on a better life. I learned how they risked it and tried to get through the hardships of coming to America and being in America. I can think of people before and see how much they have been through and how they survived by looking on the positive side. I will also try and get through my own problems this way.

Dacnarie: I agree with you. This unit also showed me how brave and strong one person can really be. When I think about what the immigrants have been through and how they went through it, it makes me think that my problem is nothing and that I can go through them just like the immigrants did.

D&L: Dacnarie and Loretta signing out!

The Mean Ducky by Loretta Yong

The Mean Ducky

Ducky is so mean,
very,
very,
very,
MEAN

She told her friends,
her very,
very,
very,
precious friends
to go to a bad place

And so her friends,
weeped in the corner.

Gone by Dacnarie Molina

Gone

The name on your hand,
going,
leaving,
gone.

The number on your palm,
running away,
moving along,
walking away.

The word on your skin,
washed,
cleaned,
faded,
gone.

Thursday, June 11, 2009

Scribble, Scribble....


Writing has been with us since the dawn of time. Everyone, or most people, start writing in Pre-K. Well, everybody starts to write by scribbling. We pick up a marker, pen, or pencil and scribble. But as we grow we learn how to write.

This year in Humanities class, we learned how to write better and in more ways. We learned how to write essays, poems, and how to answer short answer questions. During the ELA test, Dacnarie and Loretta were learning how to write better essays. One thing they learned was how to interpret documents and how to put examples into the essay using transition words ( as you can see in our posts! Hehe ). For example, during the ELA test we had to write a essay after reading two stories and we had to make our essay interesting so instead of just using 'for example', 'another example', 'one way', etc. We used 'in addition', 'despite that', 'however', 'but', etc. That was one way we made our essays more interesting using the examples.

In the beginning of the year, Loretta was once a scribbler. Someone who knew how to write but not how to organize her writing properly. In Humanities class, she learned how to organize her writing. For example, in her immigrants essay she used what she learned about organizing and using examples. She labeled her sections and learned what to put in her sections. She had a section in her essay called Living in America and it was about how Chinese immigrants had a hard time living in America and how it was also good living in America.

In the beginning of the year, Dacnarie was also a scribbler. She was never a good speller. But as the year went by she started to get better at spelling and organizing her writing. Like, in her essay for the Social Studies Test. She made a DBQ essay planner that helped her organize her work. Also since her vocabulary got a lot bigger, she was able to spell with no problem. Dacnarie also did the immigrant essay project. Her project was about a Japanese immigrant named Q. Q was break dancer who lived in Japan but later on came to America. It was more difficult for her to express herself in Japan than in America. Dacnarie had to make the essay look like a magazine article. So what she did was put a picture of Q right in the middle of the article and wrote around it. She thought this project was cool and that she started getting better at her writing.

As you can see....well, read... we have gotten better and we will take what her have learned to high school and continue to learn more there also.

Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Then & Now


In September, we weren't really understanding book as we are now. We read books for fun but we didn't really understand why the author wrote the book, the characters, and the plot. For example, Dacnarie read a book called Summer of Secrets by Paul Langan in 7th grade and while reading the book she found it hard to picture the characters personality and looks. She also found it hard to understand why certain characters would do certain things. But as the months went by in Humanities class, we learned how to understand our books in different ways. One way was writing in our reading logs. Writing our reading logs helped us understand why our characters did different things and understand how their personality changed throughout the book. Loretta thought writing in the reading logs helped because while reading her books she would be able to write down what characters appeared and what she thought of them like she did in Marked by P.C Cast and Kristen Cast. She wrote down in one of her logs that she didn't trust the High Priestess, Neferet and later on her suspicions was correct.

Way back when in September, Dacnarie was not so interested in other genres besides realistic fiction and mystery. Now she is also into fantasy, romance, adventure, and horror. Dacnarie knows she is very into different genres other then realistic fiction and mystery because before she may not have enjoyed a fantasy book like, PoiSoN by Chris Wooding. This book is about a girl named Poison. Her baby sister gets kidnapped and she tries to get her back. Along with friends she met along the way. She also finds herself connecting with characters more. For example, she found herself connecting with Alice in Twilight by Stephanie Myers. Alice is Carlisle and Esme's adopted daughter. Alice is very animated. Alice shows her feelings and can be pushy at times. Dacnarie is just like that. She is animated and doesn't hide her feelings either. Also, Alice and Dacnarie both love clothes!

Loretta was the opposite of Dacnarie in September. She liked fantasy, adventure, and action. Now, she finds herself also liking more realistic fiction and non-fiction books. She knows that she's more interested in other books besides just fantasy and fiction because she really enjoyed the book Wild Swans by Jung Chang. That book was an auto-biography of Jung's mother, grandmother and herself. It talked about how life was like in China during their time. She also found herself connecting with characters like Dacnarie. For example, while reading Luna by Julie Ann Peters, she found herself connecting with Regan. Regan is Liam's, the main character, sister. He depends on Regan all the time to help keep his secret. Regan doesn't want spend all her time helping out his brother but she can't say no. Loretta knows how she feels because Loretta always has to help her dad and mom take care of her two brothers and sometimes they would take up all her time.

This year our class read The Outsiders by S.E Hinton as a read aloud. We really enjoyed reading it with our class because during the read aloud some students would act out the characters. This helped us picture what might happened in that scene. Reading aloud with the class also helped us learn how to interpret what the author was saying in their books and it helped see what other students interpreted out of the book. Loretta thought the book was saying how sometimes the way we look isn't how somebody is in the inside and it's just how other people think you are just by looking at you. Dacnarie thinks that the book was talking about someones inner self and, even though the person may look tough and doesn't look like they are well educated doesn't mean they are those things.

Reading this year in humanities helped us grow and learn as readers and as individuals. Taking all this with us will help us greatly in high school