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Thursday, June 18, 2009

The Mean Ducky by Loretta Yong

The Mean Ducky

Ducky is so mean,
very,
very,
very,
MEAN

She told her friends,
her very,
very,
very,
precious friends
to go to a bad place

And so her friends,
weeped in the corner.

2 comments:

isaiah said...

I think it was kind of funny and it was okay. I like how you girls used repitition when wrting ur poem.

Mr. Locker said...

This poem is so simple and yet so smart. I like that it's written in a children's style, but it relates to themes we deal with as mature people as well.